Hi Rylan, Well done on creating your map of Poutini's journey.I like how you have included facts at each point of the journey. Your next step would be to make sure the facts are relevant to the story so that a person could follow the journey on your map and know the story.
Bonjour Rylan. Reagan from T2. WOW! That is a great idea to showcase what towns/cities Poutini visited! I also liked how you have added in a detailed description for each of the places that he went to. What is your favourite NZ legend? Next time, you could maybe check some of the punctuation. Other than that, I really enjoyed your post.
Hi Rylan, Well done on creating your map of Poutini's journey.I like how you have included facts at each point of the journey. Your next step would be to make sure the facts are relevant to the story so that a person could follow the journey on your map and know the story.
ReplyDeleteBonjour Rylan. Reagan from T2.
ReplyDeleteWOW! That is a great idea to showcase what towns/cities Poutini visited! I also liked how you have added in a detailed description for each of the places that he went to.
What is your favourite NZ legend?
Next time, you could maybe check some of the punctuation.
Other than that, I really enjoyed your post.
Noho ora mai
Reagan