Kia Ora, My name is Adison and I am from Grey Main School I thought your work was very funny and I am differently going to do this in my own time Was it fun? Maybe next time you could add some writing so I can know more about what and why you did this activity Great work
Hi Rylan, Great to see you choosing activities off our blogging contract to post on your blog. You understand the concept of a luckily/unluckily story. Next time I would like to see you lay each part of the story out as separate paragraphs and include punctuation as this will make your work easier to read. Come and see me if you would like some help with this.
Kia Ora, My name is Adison and I am from Grey Main School I thought your work was very funny and I am differently going to do this in my own time Was it fun? Maybe next time you could add some writing so I can know more about what and why you did this activity
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Hi Rylan, Great to see you choosing activities off our blogging contract to post on your blog. You understand the concept of a luckily/unluckily story. Next time I would like to see you lay each part of the story out as separate paragraphs and include punctuation as this will make your work easier to read. Come and see me if you would like some help with this.
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