Friday 2 September 2016

Writing Reflection T3 W6

This is my reading followup. The purpose of this is to learn about frog life cycle while writing and explanation.I have used a goggle slide .I am most proud of doing lots of slides and lots of writing.Maybe  next  time I could work on adding more aspects of an explanation.

7 comments:

  1. Kia ora Rylan It's Kaede here from Mamaku Hub. I really like your explaining of the frog life cycle.I learnt a lot in you presentation.This reminds me of when I did a presentation on a butterfly's life cycle. Maybe next time you can make your slide just a bit smaller so it doesn't go off the page. From Kaede

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    1. kio ora kaede thanks for the feed back
      i made it to big by accident thats great to hear you learnt a bit about my work
      thanks again From Rylan

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  2. Kia Ora Rylan, It's me Ella. Wow your slide about frogs has a lot of information! I did not know that frogs live up to 10-12 years I thought they lived for way longer! This is an whakamataku slide and is full of true facts about frogs. Maybe next you could make your slide a little smaller so it fits on the page.
    Thanks Ella

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  3. Wow we didn't know that frogs never close their eyes! We wouldn't like to be blown away. You have taught us something today and we really liked reading it.
    from Summer and Royden.

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  4. Wow we didn't know that frogs never close their eyes! We wouldn't like to be blown away. You have taught us something today and we really liked reading it.
    from Summer and Royden.

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  5. Kia ora it's me Katelin. Wow you must of been working hard you have got a lot of information whakamataku (Awesome)From Katelin.

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  6. Ni Hao Rylan It Is Jazmine from Mamaku Hub.
    WOW Rylan I love the way you did a slide about Frogs And I think you need to Make your slide a little bit smaller.
    By Jazmine

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