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Hi Rylan. For s short writing piece, your work sure packs an emotional punch. I liked how you created the sense of fear in the first 2 sentences, causing me to read this part quite quickly like I was running too. Ataahua to mahi.
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Hi Rylan. For s short writing piece, your work sure packs an emotional punch. I liked how you created the sense of fear in the first 2 sentences, causing me to read this part quite quickly like I was running too. Ataahua to mahi.
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